Feedback From My Roughcut

These are all of the different bits of feedback that i got for my opening sequence.

- Editing - nice cuts between the gun, maybe don't use a fade
- when he's walking down the corridor, the shots are quite smooth and cut well.

- Good shots
- Well edited
- Looks good

- Lots of quick cuts could make it seem like a trailer
- Some scenes are too bright
- Good use of angles and shots

- Titles - I like that the titles are very simple, just plain white text on a black background.
- Also, i like that it shows a shot & then a title & then another shot opposed to title on shot because having the title on the shot could take away some attention from the shot

- All titles are way too fast

- Editing - The shots just need touching up as they are too bright
- Just a simple contrast change will do ( to make it darker)
- Other than that very good

- Titles - Work very well, some of the ones with more text are too short

- Good use of shots and this would benefit from the dialogue, but the shots establish the characters very well

- Name mentioned too much in the titles
- Good start with the gun

- Sound - Add dialogue andn some slow paced soundtrack to go under voice over

- Editing - Nice transitions & use of effects
- Titles between shots is good, lots of exposure, at times this worked, others it didn't
- Offtopic - Try and motivate your actor in the chair more. Needs realism

I have taken all of this feedback into account and have made the changes accordingly.